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A second
Running down her cheeks like melted wax
Or tears
This bittersweet
And had I only known
You
Before this impulse
Borne of ill will and some vagrant breeze
Fleeing into silence
Here beneath the
Voyeuristic oaks
Knee deep in fallen leaves
And falling deeper

And she breathed in sweet
Air of summer
With every Autunm breath
Dying to live and I said nothing
Watching her leaves fall like rain or
Like blood
Bought bitter
Spent upon this stone
And for a promise I would have bled
An eternity
But she could not be more than this

And I want to feel this burn me away like ash
Tearing into the wind
So soon, this burning light bends
Into an extinguished pallor
Breaking on the dusk like a myriad wishes
And she could feel it slipping away
So slow like summer slips
And I could hold onto that last bit
A breath, a sigh
Her fingers cool like wax again
And then
Release.
©2005-2009 ~Chornyi
:iconchornyi:

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:iconlitlumanuth:
Very awesome. I really liked this "Her fingers cool like wax again" :)

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'i am attempting to kill, the little boy inside.'
:iconburnedbonemeal:
This'd make a mean metal track.

The title says Hush, but my mind could do anything but that as I read this. And again, your imagery astounds me. :D I can really see this as a song. I was even singing to it metal-ly as I read..

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"Death and life are in the power of the tongue: and those who love it shall eat its fruit." -Proverbs 18:21
:iconchornyi:
:aww: thank yous, I'm glad you liked it. I liked that last bit too.

--
Chornyi
~
A black winter day
No, darker than that
Gloomier than an autumn night

I'm so gothic, I'm not only dead, I'm a f&^*$%# ZOMBIE!
(:zombie:)
Your brain is mine.
:iconchornyi:
I wish it was a metal song :) maybe it will be one someday. I can't seem to write anything but lyrics now :P I wish I could hear how you were singing it.

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Chornyi
~
A black winter day
No, darker than that
Gloomier than an autumn night

I'm so gothic, I'm not only dead, I'm a f&^*$%# ZOMBIE!
(:zombie:)
Your brain is mine.
:iconcadzthefraek:
'Running down her cheek like melted wax' I love that line! I got a vision of someone watching a tree bleed o.O I have no clue why but.. it was good hehe :D I enjoyed it a lot.

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-Cadia

~Simplicity, I can deal with that.

~*threatens* Smile, you fool!
:iconchornyi:
YAY!!I'm glad you loved it. and I like the imagery you got from it!! kik.. :P

--
Chornyi
~
A black winter day
No, darker than that
Gloomier than an autumn night

I'm so gothic, I'm not only dead, I'm a f&^*$%# ZOMBIE!
(:zombie:)
Your brain is mine.
:iconcadzthefraek:
Noo its bad to the treehugger here :P the poor tree lmfao. but yes I love all your work you know :P

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-Cadia

~Simplicity, I can deal with that.

~*threatens* Smile, you fool!
:iconchornyi:
hehe I like trees too.. I'm glad you love all my work!!! :P

--
Chornyi
~
A black winter day
No, darker than that
Gloomier than an autumn night

I'm so gothic, I'm not only dead, I'm a f&^*$%# ZOMBIE!
(:zombie:)
Your brain is mine.

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