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the elegance of common thought
an exhalation
glacial in its imperative whisper
commanding silence
breaking dawns
betrayal breathes a shard
glass-bright and piercing

some words
relating to blood flow
temperatures of caring
temperant and cooling
the alchemical resistance of a coded sigh

no breath
to refuse the instance
in a gasp suppressed
your intention surpassed
a dim view of receding lines
collapsed outside the window
some sort of pardon for a failing glance.
©2006-2009 ~Chornyi
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:iconerkornlish:
I Like this one. The Second stanza works well to my mind.

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All people are created equal but some are more equal than others.

I'm not real yet but I'll keep trying 'till Pinocchio's a real boy.

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