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SOMETHING LIKE THAT by ~Chornyi:iconChornyi:



You'd try forever if I asked you
But you'd drown an hour at a time
You know I didn't have to
But nothing could ever have stopped me
From falling this far
Nothing but you

And I'm so afraid
I've gone too far
(That's why it is so perfect)
My hopes were always burning
The bridges of our journey
Now why would I
Do something like that?

You told me not to worry
These flowers have to wither
Something written in their leaves
Some self-destructive code
And we could both see our way to leaving
When there was no going back
That's why it was so perfect

I broke my voice
Trying to tell you not to call
And we fell so far
When the sky came down
It was like learning to crawl
You had to start a little at a time
Now why would you
Do something like that?

And I think I have to let go
With both hands
Because I'm too afraid to hold on
With just one

I think I can see my window
And something to break my fall
If you'll just tell me one more time
That's why it was so perfect.
©2005-2009 ~Chornyi
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:iconsango-67:
Awesome. This one really catches my attention. That's why it's so perfect :nod:

Have you ever considered getting stuff published? Because It'd be awesome to have a book of your poems. Then I can be all "I know the author! PHEAR MY AWESOMENESS!! >D" or something. XD;

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NEW ACCOUNT!! Please direct yourself to ~Go-Go-Nami
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I no longer use this account
:iconchornyi:
:aww: I'm really glad you like it. Yeah, I'd love to be published, but I don't know if that will ever happen. I have a book of poems compiled, but I'm waiting on someone to do the artwork. And I don't know when he'll be able to get to it.
But it would be awesome :) And if it happens, you can definitely tell people you not only know me, but I comissioned a pic from you :P :heart:

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Chornyi
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A black winter day
No, darker than that
Gloomier than an autumn night

I'm so gothic, I'm not only dead, I'm a f&^*$%# ZOMBIE!
(:zombie:)
Your brain is mine.
:iconsango-67:
Yesss! ^^ That would be SO awesome. So make sure you tell me a million times when you get published so I can go buy it. =3 :glomp:

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NEW ACCOUNT!! Please direct yourself to ~Go-Go-Nami
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I no longer use this account
:iconchornyi:
I will :hug: :P

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Chornyi
~
A black winter day
No, darker than that
Gloomier than an autumn night

I'm so gothic, I'm not only dead, I'm a f&^*$%# ZOMBIE!
(:zombie:)
Your brain is mine.
:iconalfakim:
this one seems to me to be someone who knows they have to end their relationship because the love must have gone in it. when you're in love you cant ever even imagine the other person doing something bad to you, but in this poem they have, and you know the reason why, so you leave

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• "'Thou shalt not' is soon forgotten, but 'Once upon a time' lasts forever." •
:iconcadzthefraek:
oo -luffs a lot- sounds like someone breaking away from a part of themselves, loosing it because they have to.

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-Cadia

~Simplicity, I can deal with that.

~*threatens* Smile, you fool!
:iconchornyi:
yes :) it's also about knowing exactly how much the other person is capable of giving.. and sometimes that's not enough. it doesn't necessarily imply a lack of love, just perhaps not enough giving.,
it's not a choice I could make, but it's one that I can explore in this realm.

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Chornyi
~
A black winter day
No, darker than that
Gloomier than an autumn night

I'm so gothic, I'm not only dead, I'm a f&^*$%# ZOMBIE!
(:zombie:)
Your brain is mine.
:iconchornyi:
:aww: I'm glad you luff it :hug: that makes me happy!!! <clings>

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Chornyi
~
A black winter day
No, darker than that
Gloomier than an autumn night

I'm so gothic, I'm not only dead, I'm a f&^*$%# ZOMBIE!
(:zombie:)
Your brain is mine.
:iconcadzthefraek:
^_^ -clings back- glad youre hapy :P but it's one of the best things you've written , thats why I luff it.

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-Cadia

~Simplicity, I can deal with that.

~*threatens* Smile, you fool!

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